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在托福独立写作中 “二选一”是最有数的题型，“一边倒”也是ag真人平台在审题后首选的文章布局，紧张是基于它所带来的内容的详确性和支持的力度性。 但是敷衍大局部考生就某些标题标思绪而言很难完成“一边倒”的解构，那么这时就会引入一个退让段来完成内容的富裕性，ag真人平台先来看一道真题：
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to watch serious movies to get deeper thoughts than to watch movies that amuse or entertain you. Compare both advantages and use specific examples and details to support your answer.
serious movies 益处
entertaining movies 益处
1. provide people with an opportunity to extend their horizon and absorb a vast amount of knowledge.
1. make the audience laugh help us to forget our troubles, release our pressure and feel relaxed and happy .
2. to enrich people’s inner world.
At first, watching entertaining movies has many advantages. It means funny or even absurd, movies such as comedies that are intended to make the audience laugh help us to forget our troubles, release our pressure and feel relaxed and happy for a long time. For example, American pies, which has all the ingredients of a good movie. The film has one liners, sight gags, and situations that very funny. The audience, which ranged from teenagers to middle age, laughed almost constantly and out loud. So watching entertaining movies does have many advantages. But I support the idea that watching serious movies is better .
——对方益处 / 我方缺陷
从语气上削弱：Admittedly/ Undoubtedly/It is conceded that/It is true that/Indeed
从数量大小上削弱：one/one or two/ a couple of/minor
从水平上削弱：to some extent/to some degree
2. 不支持方益处简述(≤ 2句话)
Indeed, funny or even absurd, movies such as comedies that are intended to make the audience laugh help us to forget our troubles, release our pressure and feel relaxed and happy for a while. However, we have to admit that after a temporary laugh, nothing meaningful or educational is left. On the contrary, serious movies that broaden our view, grant us hopes and make us examine the things we do,the value we revere and the way we behave and treat people around us are cherished as treasures and can go through the test of the time.
例：Do you agree or disagree with the statement?
Parents should help their children make decisions.
Admittedly, some people claim that it is beneficial for the kids if their parents make decisions for them. Due to their rich life experience and mature thoughts, adults are able to make more objective and correct judgment than the innocent children. However, for the children themselves, this is not an act of trustworthiness. They might think that their parents doubt about their abilities and talents, which may lead to conflict between children and their parents，affecting the communication at the same time. Thus, I believe parents should allow children to make decisions on their own.