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独立写作中二选一标题退让段的准确写法

公布时间:2019-10-14 09:03:34     欣赏次数:175


托福独立写作中 “二选一”是最有数的题型,“一边倒”也是ag真人平台在审题后首选的文章布局,紧张是基于它所带来的内容的详确性和支持的力度性。 但是敷衍大局部考生就某些标题标思绪而言很难完成“一边倒”的解构,那么这时就会引入一个退让段来完成内容的富裕性,ag真人平台先来看一道真题:

  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

  It is better to watch serious movies to get deeper thoughts than to watch movies that amuse or entertain you. Compare both advantages and use specific examples and details to support your answer.

  拿到这个标题,审题思绪的志向版本是“一边倒”,但是绞尽脑汁思索之后实际的思绪模板倒是:

 

serious movies 益处

entertaining movies 益处

1. provide people with an opportunity to extend their horizon and absorb a vast amount of knowledge.

1. make the audience laugh help us to forget our troubles, release our pressure  and feel relaxed and happy .

 

2. to enrich people’s inner world.




 

 

  这种环境下ag真人平台只能采取参与一个退让段的文章布局情势,但是在细致应用时弟子重复会写出多么的退让段:

  At first, watching entertaining movies has many advantages. It means funny or even absurd, movies such as comedies that are intended to make the audience laugh help us to forget our troubles, release our pressure and feel relaxed and happy for a long time. For example, American pies, which has all the ingredients of a good movie. The film has one liners, sight gags, and situations that very funny. The audience, which ranged from teenagers to middle age, laughed almost constantly and out loud. So watching entertaining movies does have many advantages. But I support the idea that watching serious movies is better .

  颠末下面弟子的写作实例,ag真人平台不难发现此中退让段不支持方益处写的过多过好,从而消弱了自身态度的益处。这是退让段誊录中的典范标题。那么怎样修正才气写出妥当的退让段呢?ag真人平台先看一下退让段的一些基本要求:

  1. 退让段作用

  ——表现作者思量标题双方面

  2. 可作为退让的要素

  ——对方益处 / 我方缺陷

  3. 退让段位置

  ——第二段或第四段(推荐第四段)

  4. 退让段框架

  ——退让,迁移变化,反驳(相对词类不写)

  5. 退让主题句,对退让内容举行简明展开,迁移变化句,反驳(相对词类不写)

  6. 退让段主题句写法:四种要领可以削弱退让内容:

  从语气上削弱:Admittedly/ Undoubtedly/It is conceded that/It is true that/Indeed

  从约莫性上削弱 :may/might/possibly/probably

  从数量大小上削弱:one/one or two/ a couple of/minor

  从水平上削弱:to some extent/to some degree

  颠末上述内容,ag真人平台可以总结“三步走战略”完成退让段:

  1. 退让的逻辑衔接引出退让

  2. 不支持方益处简述(≤ 2句话)

  3. 迁移变化(有利于我方态度和见地)

  因此上述弟子的写作实例依据上述 “三步走战略”修正如下:

  Indeed, funny or even absurd, movies such as comedies that are intended to make the audience laugh help us to forget our troubles, release our pressure and feel relaxed and happy for a while. However, we have to admit that after a temporary laugh, nothing meaningful or educational is left. On the contrary, serious movies that broaden our view, grant us hopes and make us examine the things we do,the value we revere and the way we behave and treat people around us are cherished as treasures and can go through the test of the time.

  着末,再给大家一道真题演练一下退让段的机动运用:

  例:Do you agree or disagree with the statement?

  Parents should help their children make decisions.

  Disagree!

  Admittedly, some people claim that it is beneficial for the kids if their parents make decisions for them. Due to their rich life experience and mature thoughts, adults are able to make more objective and correct judgment than the innocent children. However, for the children themselves, this is not an act of trustworthiness. They might think that their parents doubt about their abilities and talents, which may lead to conflict between children and their parents,affecting the communication at the same time. Thus, I believe parents should allow children to make decisions on their own.




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